tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420985887871930530.post1960713918393350719..comments2013-01-13T07:56:51.464-08:00Comments on Talking With An Alternate You: She Felt StrongerMuhammad Edwan Shaharirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15601174540942533511noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420985887871930530.post-78540893193039844182009-01-31T19:21:00.000-08:002009-01-31T19:21:00.000-08:00kesian wiseguy..:'(serves him well, but i kesian.:...kesian wiseguy..<BR/><BR/>:'(<BR/><BR/>serves him well, but i kesian.<BR/><BR/>:"(Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03431147145339913004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420985887871930530.post-64746734372377684142009-01-30T23:34:00.000-08:002009-01-30T23:34:00.000-08:00I like the long, very well written conversations. ...I like the long, very well written conversations. You're showing closure, but the Rafar getting back to her was a bit mashed in, mcm you're in a hurry to make sure she takes off the ring in this episode.<BR/><BR/>I know Evie is your star character, but I can't seem to like her :/ I think its the whole very beautiful, rich and successful girl with a hot man in her arms and her flaw is her fragileness. If thats how you want your character to be, then you did a great job, but she's not my heroine la hehe. Kasandra is :)<BR/><BR/>I think it's better if you developed the story more, how Rafar came to decide to dump Farihin, and go back to Evie, and how Evie really decides to move on for good, because then it won't come as a shock, mcm you just want Adam and Evie to hook up and start describing their story pulak. Make it a little less simpler maybe?<BR/><BR/>Anyway that's my two cents. I don't mean to offend you if I did :)Mardhiahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18324667577850927967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420985887871930530.post-7264455630425773902009-01-30T21:28:00.000-08:002009-01-30T21:28:00.000-08:00aaa. i dont know why i sort of hate rafar now.:OGO...aaa. i dont know why i sort of hate rafar now.<BR/>:O<BR/><BR/>GO EVIE!Dinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18419425944522555478noreply@blogger.com